Your Perseverance has paid off with this piece. This is very well illustrated and you should keep up the good work. A suggestion would mean instead of worrying about perspective, forget perspective and do what you can to validate the scenes you create. I like that the piece has a very relaxed atmosphere as many of your pieces do. For you, a great opportunity may come from exploring various emotions and using props to further validate your environments. 1. TV remote 2. Popcorn Dries out your mouth, so maybe a soda or some candy nearby 3. design elements to tell us more about the character.
always consider the who, what, when, where, and why of your art. Over all, very good work. Hint: Perspective, while important can prove to hinder your artistic process if given excessive consideration. Do your best with it and no worries.
You did well! ^_^ art is ALL about flow, just go with it and just remember to challenge yourself. ^_^ sometimes we think we're lazy, but maybe we're just scared of realizing our potential. You can do great things. ^___^